Prompt #18 for 2010: If Only…

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β€’β€’> The eighteenth prompt for 2010 is: IF ONLY… How many ways can one go with that short phrase? If only…: …I’d been there …you’d been here …you could have seen …I ruled the world …I had listened …you had listened …it were up to me …I hadn’t …I would have …you knew …you could see …time stood still …I could change …it had been different …I could remember — I think you get the picture, the ways to continue the phrase “if only” are seemingly endless. For this prompt, pick one and go with it.

So please consider the short phrase, and tell us in your words (poem, prose, flash fiction, etc.) the who, what, where, when, why or how regarding if only… — include any visual image you might want to incorporate, and let yourself go with whatever it is that moves you to write…

Relax, respond to the prompt when you’re ready — or just leave a comment to say hi! As always, welcome to the the Island!!! πŸ˜‰

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84 responses to “Prompt #18 for 2010: If Only…

  1. I posted a piece of microfiction with this title a while back. Are we permitted to repeat? (I have a busy week this week)

    • writersisland

      Please do reprise it Viv, some may have missed it first time around — and if you are overcome with fresh inspiration later during your whirlwind, please post that as well… as is true for all Islanders, it’s always what works for you on the Island — we just enjoy your visits… πŸ˜‰

  2. Hi, this is my first time here, enjoyed the prompt, looking forward to reading everyone else’s :o)
    This is mine …
    http://thecaterpillaruprising.blogspot.com/2010/08/writers-island-prompt-18-if-only.html

    • writersisland

      Deborah, welcome to Writer’s Island, we hope to see you on the beach often — and thank you for sharing your work… πŸ˜‰

  3. I had written it a couple of days ago, not knowing the prompt. It suits it to a t:

    http://firmlyrooted.blogspot.com/2010/08/rock-bands-rock-out-of-my-brain.html

  4. If we only we could change that which seems so unfair or has come too soon…

    Here’s mine.

  5. My apologies. My puter is having issues, so it might take me a bit of time to get back and read everyone else’s responses. I’m slow, puter is definitely slower today.

    Perfect Imperfection

    http://1sojournal.wordpress.com/2010/08/28/perfect-imperfection/

  6. This is my first time here.

    Instead of repeating “if only,” it felt right to use the repetition of “it’s okay.” Yes, you may have many wishes and desires, but it’s okay if you can’t have them, it’s okay to feel alone, it’s okay to feel helpless.

    Everyone At 3 A.M.
    by Gally Lines
    .:Lest I Smite Thee:. blog
    http://lestismitethee.wordpress.com/2010/03/25/writing-everyone-at-3am/

    • writersisland

      Very cool Christine, and welcome to Writer’s Island! I so envy you if you have no ‘if only’ regrets or wishes in your life — hope we see you on the beach often… πŸ˜‰

  7. Pan

    Hello and thanks for another great prompt πŸ™‚

    Here’s mine. . .

    Storm – http://panopticulated.blogspot.com/2010/08/writers-island-prompt-18-if-only.html

  8. systematicweasel

    http://systematicweasel.wordpress.com/2010/08/28/if-only-writers-island/

    Mine can be found at the link above. Thanks for the prompt!

    -Weasel =)

  9. Irene

    Oh brilliant prompt Rob!

    rainbow

  10. http://distillingthoughts.blogspot.com/2009/11/speed.html

    it’s an old blog but i thought of sharing it to you πŸ™‚

  11. first time here.. so I guess this’ll go to moderation as per the sidebar saying πŸ˜€

    anyway, was a pleasure to write.. and plan to be a regular..
    If Only – Leo

  12. i hope you will get a glimpse of what it’s like to be gay and to hide it for some particular reason.

    http://thenoiselesspatientspider.blogspot.com/2010/08/imagery-in-poetry-number-twenty-four.html

  13. Tom

    First time for these things, even if its late, reality sinks in.

    You can find me here
    http://anewadventureeveryday.blogspot.com/2010/09/if-only-id-writers-island-prompt.html

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